Thursday 10 February 2011

Improvements On Children's Film

Watching our children opening film back, there are a few improvements that could be made to the sequence, such as

1. The length of the opening sequence is far too long for an opening sequence therefore we could of shortened it as it sort of drags on for too long and gives away the whole story.

2.Throughout the sequence, there are a lot of pauses which we could of improved on and made the clips faster as it draws away attention. This is a main area to improve on because the main thing to focus on is to draw peoples attention to the sequence and it needs to have a good flow.

3. Sound is also something to improve on. Background noise occurs in the sequence which shouldn't be in there which ruins the film a little bit. Also I feel as if we could of used more lively music in the sequence to represent happiness whereas I think the sequence is fairly quite and only has a few interesting noises in. Shadows and a few jumpy movements also occur in the sequence which we could of improved on. If we ever do this sort of thing again we know to be extra careful when performing this.

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